This term we are learning to write explanations. For our first piece of writing we had to explain either the best or worst part of our holiday.
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Shopping at
Queens Gate mall
The best part of the holidays was going
to Queens Gate mall.
I was so happy to see my mum after she
had been working for a week in Masterton.
My mum was kind enough to get me a new
school bag and an ice cream.
I got to go to my favourite shops. My
favourites are Smiggle and Nature Discoveries.
I can’t wait to go again.
Emma
Baby Birthday
The best part of
my holiday was going to my now one-year old cousin Christian’s birthday party.
The best part of
the party was seeing him crawl. He can crawl really fast. I loved seeing most
of my family and helping Christian open his present.
I can’t wait to
see him again.
Neve
On the road to Ohakune
The best bit of my holiday was when I went to Ohakune with Hamish and
Hannah. Ohakune is in the middle of the north island.
The first thing that I liked was when we were going to Ohakune we were playing
air instruments to the music in the car.
The second thing that I liked was meeting new people at the ski club.
The third thing that I liked was playing board games.
Like snakes and ladders and head bands.
That was the best thing in the holidays.
Charlotte
Going to
dinner
The best part of my holiday was going to a
friends for dinner. The friends names were Philapa and Franx. When we got there
we went and swam in Franx pool the pool was warm. It also was really big. We
had Mexican food after we swam in the pool. One of Philapas friends came and his name is Randy. Randy had
a dog the dog was a French bulldog. Then Franx brought her dog over her dog was
a pug. That’s why going to my friends house for dinner was the best part of my
holiday.
Addis
Seeing my sister Anna
The best thing
that happened to me was when my sister came to my house. I like seeing my
sister because she lives in Stokes Valley, that’s in Upper Hutt. When she comes
over we enjoy making couches out of blankets we find around the house.
Sometimes they are comfortable and some times they are really uncomfortable.
I love seeing
my sister because she’s my only sister.
Harvie
Hide and Go Seek
The
best part of my holiday was when I played hide-and-go-seek with my two year old
baby cousin.
When
I was hiding I could hear him count random numbers and the last number was
five.
When
he was hiding I could hear him giggling in his hiding spot.
So
at the end of the day I lost but it was fine because he kept on squealing and
running around when I told him he won.
Ojhan
Mia’s birthday party
The best thing about my holiday was going to Mia’s birthday party.
I liked Mia’s birthday because we stayed up all night partying until we
went home. We gave each other makeovers like painting our nails and putting
lipstick on and putting chalk in our hair and playing on the trampoline. We played games like the
flower game the chocolate game. I played families with Mia’s little sister
Lily. My favourite game was the chocolate game. You had to roll a dice and if
you the number 6 you had to put on a
glove, hat, scarf and cut a piece of chococlate with a knife and fork.
Mia’s birthday was the best thing about my holiday.
Nohaila
Hut
Disaster
In
the holidays I went to a holiday programme at Holy Cross School.
On
the first day we built huts we had to do it in groups. My group had Louie,
Luke, Chilli and me.
Our
hut was named the Mini Man Cave. It was made out of cardboard and paper. When
it was finished we had to vote for who had the best hut. Everyone vote for our
hut except for two people.
On
the last day of the holiday programme we had to demolish our huts EVERYONE was
breaking mine but the sad thing was that only one person got to jump on rubbish
in the skip bin. That was the sad thing of my holidays.
Ryan
Seeing My Cool Cousin
The best thing I did in the holiday was
to be able to see my cool cousin Aliyah.
The first reason is because we haven’t
seen each other in a couple of years.
Secondly, my mum was friends with her
mum (my aunty) and she was always around with Aliyah, then me and Aliyah became
the best of friends.
Lastly, we got to hangout together like
old times but this time it was even better because my best friend got to join
in on all the fun of discovering new things.
That is why seeing my cool cousin was
the best thing I did in the holidays.
Sapphire
Shopping at Kmart
The best bit of my holiday was doing
shopping at Kmart .
It was a long way away from home.
It was so boring at home because there was nothing
to do.
I brought some activities like
Colouring and making .
madhu
Tangi
When the first
holiday happened we went to Tekau for a Tangi . It was my great nana that died.
Seventy-five people came to my Nana’s Tangi.
We stayed
there for a week. It took us 11hours to get there. We left at one-o-clock we
stopped at Hamilton for a rest at my auntie’s house we stayed there for the
night. My aunty came with my cousins and us. When we got there and went inside
my mum sat next to my Nana Mahera . She was crying because my Nana was dead. When
it was night time I met my cousin that I never knew, we played heaps of games.
Havana
THE ANT HOUSE!
The worst thing in the
holiday was there were lots of ants in the cupboard.
My dad and me had to clean
the cupboards.
The first thing I didn’t
like was washing the dishes and the alcohol.
The second thing that I
didn’t like was standing and working all day.
The last thing I did not
like was taking everything out of the cupboard.
That was the worst thing
that happened in the holiday.
Jack
The
Confusing Day
The best thing in the holiday was going to laser strike. At
first I thought we where going to laser force but we where going to laser
strike.
It was great to catch up with dads friends Kyle and his wife
Isabella. At first I came 2nd and Isabella came 3rd and
then 2nd round I came 3rd and she came 2nd so
we basically swapped places.
At the end we played a few little machine car games. First
me and Isabella and then Dad and Kyle. Dad and I were men so Isabella were
girls.
That was my whole holiday story.
Olivia
The Road Trip
The
best part of the holidays was the road trip to Kaitaia because…
1.I
got to see lots of places like Taupo and Bay of islands.
2.We
got to stop at my family and friend’s houses to say hello and have a cuppa.
3.
We watched heaps of movies and listened to music in the car.
That
was a pretty fun, even though I sat in the back!
Mahera
THE SUNDAY DISASTER
The WORST Thing
that happened in the holidays was when I couldn’t go to my friend Christians
house
I didn’t want to
go to the mall with my family. When I got home I was going to ring him because
my mum said I could ring but he didn’t answer.
That day I
thought that it was a bit weird how she
said no instead of yes or sure.
Tom
The Tawa Trip
In the holiday I went on a train trip to Tawa. When we got on the train
we got a train ticket.
When we went along the train tracks my aunty told me there were two
tunnels. In the tunnel I heard one train coming.
When I got there I played video games with my friend. Sometimes I won
and sometimes I lost.
We went back home on the train.
Sarith
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